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Re: The Boy and His Moon
Oh. My. Gosh. This is quite possibly the best story I have read on here. Not only is it well-written, but it has so many other things going for it. ...
Jan 17, 2011 -
Re: Gale-A hunger Games fanfic
As a huge fan of the Hunger Games trilogy, I have to admit I was pretty psyched to see this piece. I hated the ending of Mockingjay. As in, I ...
Jan 16, 2011 -
Re: Idolatry
I love this! Why do you have to be so darn good at poetry? The thing is, it's impossible to review, you know? The concept is great, as is the ...
Jan 15, 2011 -
Re: pluto
Well, it would be a waste of time to critique this; besides, there's really not that much that needs to be changed. The poem is vague, yes, but abstract is ...
Jan 14, 2011 -
Re: Feelings?
Hahaha. This poem made me laugh. Comparing feelings with political leaders is certianly a new way to look at it. I also like your use of parentheses. And I'm too ...
Jan 11, 2011 -
Re: One by One (prologue)
Hey Flow! So I am here to review this short but very sweet little piece of yours. I'm not going to get into abrstract nitpicking. (i.e., Who is your character? ...
Jan 10, 2011 -
Re: The Bedside Angel
I loved this. You made the girl so ethereal, and yet so real, I kind of wanted her myself. ;) It was beautifully written and handled a kind of steamy ...
Jan 8, 2011 -
Re: Stuff
You know what this poem reminds me of? Something by Doctor Seuss, like "One Fish, Two fish, Red Fish, Blue Fish." :D I loved it! The rhyme and rhythm were ...
Jan 2, 2011 -
Re: You died, tonight.
I'll apologize in advance for the spamness, but . . . OH MY GOSH. LIKE, LIKE, LIKE. *freaks out and hits "Like" button 400 billion times* *clears throat* Yes, well. ...
Jan 2, 2011 -
Re: How to be Awkward
I am not going to bother nitpicking this; after all, there's really isn't anything to nitpick. Utter brilliance, my friend. Wry, witty, sometimes laugh-out-loud hilarious. I know several people who ...
Dec 30, 2010 -
Re: The truth about teachers
Hahaha. This is no review at all but oh well. I thought it was quite funny, sort of reminded me of a cartoon or a sitcom. The part about the ...
Dec 25, 2010 -
Re: The Christmas Code
Ah, a healthy dose of cynicism for Christmas Eve. :3 Reading this successfully killed my holiday cheer (for a few minutes, at least), but that is probably the aim of ...
Dec 25, 2010 -
Re: Stagnant
Persephoneia, dear, why must you always make it so difficult to review your poetry? One can't, you know, because you're just too darn GOOD. It's really becoming an annoyance to ...
Dec 25, 2010 -
Re: Humor
Haha, I enjoyed this, mi amiga. One can't exactly review it as it is about both nothing and everything, neither of which are particularly easy to review, but one (such ...
Dec 25, 2010 -
Re: Suicide
This is a good poem, and most everyone else has taken care of nitpicks, so I won't bother with that. However, one thing I will say is: the whole thing ...
Dec 25, 2010
